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Wednesday, 23 May 2018

E-Portfolio Writing Term 2 - Creature Feature writing



E-PORTFOLIO - Creature Feature Writing - Term Two
ACHIEVEMENT OBJECTIVES:


Learning goals - Planning


Research Goals:
LEVEL 2
  • I can include a range of relevant information using different types of resources.
  • I can use graphic organisers to plan my writing.


LEVEL 3
  • I can include a range of relevant information using different types of resources.
  • I can use graphic organisers to plan my writing.


LEVEL 4
  • I can use my research skills to find and record the information needed for my writing (using different resources).
  • I can plan effectively and add my own headings/ideas to a plan.


Learning goals- Writing
LEVEL 2
  • I can use labelled pictures (diagrams) and illustrations to help my understanding.
  • I can write simple and compound sentences that make sense.
  • I can use clear and precise adjectives and nouns, strong verbs and adverbs
LEVEL 3
  • I can use labelled pictures (diagrams) and illustrations to help my understanding
  • I can write simple and compound sentences that make sense.
  • I can use clear and precise adjectives and nouns, strong verbs and adverbs


LEVEL 4
  • I can use labelled pictures (diagrams) and illustrations to help my understanding
  • I can write some complex sentences
  • I can use language that is appropriate to audience and purpose (subject specific)


Animal Name: aldrabra tortoise!


Dear aldrabra tortoise! Why is your shell so depressing?
Wow how rude! My shell is only a dark shade so a hawk won't spot me all through the sand and dry Savannahs. I'm glad
that my shell is not as colourful as a parrot so I don't die!

Dear aldrabra tortoise! what does your shell do to protect you?
You probably don't know why shell is so thick it does protect me from predators. Most important of all my shell is
thick so when I'm on dry land it keeps me from being dehydrated!





1 comment:

  1. You have used some different simple and compound sentences to do your questions and answers. The beginnings of your sentences are sometimes varied and you’re starting to choose some interesting vocab.

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